Do you think that some people are destined to meet?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
The universe works in unexplainable ways, Sir [이름]!
There must be cosmic reasons why we meet certain people in our lives. Regardless if they are our soul mates or just people who meant to cross our paths. This is wonderful. I hope you are all well, see you!
~Teacher Eunice
I am a christian and Jesus asked people not to believe other gods except him.
>>> I am a Christian and Jesus asked people not to believe other gods except him.
I am not sure if believing destiny is kind of gods.
>>> I am not sure if believing in destiny is for God.
However, It looks like superstition.
>>> However, it looks like a superstition.
That is my first reason why I don\'t believe destiny.
>>> That is my first reason why I don\'t believe in destiny.
I have tried to meet ladies when I reached thirty years old, because I would like to get married at that time.
>>> I have tried meeting ladies when I reached thirty years old, because I would like to get married at that time.
Some people told me that there would be somebody for me and I might date with her.
>>> correct!
>>> Some people used to say that there would be someone out there for me.
If so, people say that it is destiny and I met the lady who god send to me . But I think that it is just time to meet someone.
>>> If so, then people would say that I was destined to meet the woman who God sent me, but I thought it was just the perfect time.
I don\'t think people are destined to meet.
>>> correct!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.