Do you think that students should have a ticket discount in buying concert tickets?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think there\'s no need for student\'s discount for concert. Usually something having student\'s discount are essential for living like public transportation, or educational such as museums.
Kpop concerts are none of these, so i don\'t think that student\'s discount for concert is a good idea.
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Hello there again, Jo! It is great to see you here on the composition page.
First of all, I can say that you have a very good background in writing. It is evident in the way you put simple and other complex sentences altogether. The suggestions I made are very simple ones to remind you of some grammar patterns. Hence, kindly read them carefully below.
Meanwhile, I agree that a student discount is unnecessary since a concert is a form of entertainment and it is not a need or primary commodity. Food, shelter, and education are out basic needs that we can get discounts from. Students then have to rely on their parents money in this regard.
Thank you for the time that you wrote and answered the homework. I really appreciate it. See you on your next answer!
-T. Donna~
>> I think there\'s no need for a student discount for concerts.
Usually something having student\'s discount are essential for living like public transportation, or educational such as museums.
>> Usually (something like/ having) a student discount is essential for living like public transportation, or educational such as museums./ Very good sentence!
Kpop concerts are none of these, so i don\'t think that student\'s discount for concert is a good idea.
>> Correct!
Or: K-pop concerts are none of these, so I don\'t think that student\'s discount for concerts is a good idea.
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