Do you think that taxis should be classified as a form of public transport? Why or why not?

2012-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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I think taxi shouldn't be classified as a form of public transport. Because if taxi classified as a form of public transport, transfer disccount rate is decreased. If so, if transfer disccount rate is decreased what happen? In that case a lot of people will feel economical burden. For example, when you attend office you will take bus. You will transfer 3330 bus to 1500-2 bus. And when you go back home you transfer 1500-2 bus to 3330 bus. In one monthe you will go to office 25 times at least. If transfer disccount rate is decreased from 200won to 100won you will pay 5000won more than before that taxis should not be classified as a form of public transport. Consequently you must more pay 5000won when transfer disccount rate is decreased to 100won. So I think, taxis should not be classified as a form of public transport.

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GOOD DAY, Vincent! Thank you so much for finding time to finish your composition. I really appreciate that. You did a great job today. Keep up the good job! Below are the corrections given. Have a wonderful day and take care! I\'ll talk to you again tomorrow. I think taxi shouldn\'t be classified as a form of public transport. >>I think taxis shouldn\'t be classified as a form of public transportation.Because if taxi classified as a form of public transport, transfer disccount rate is decreased. >>If taxis are classified as a form of public transportation, the transfer discount rate will decrease.If so, if transfer disccount rate is decreased what happen? >>If so, what will happen if the transfer discount rate will decrease?In that case a lot of people will feel economical burden. >>In that case, a lot of people will feel economically burdened.For example, when you attend office you will take bus. >>For example, when you go to the office, you have to take the bus. You will transfer 3330 bus to 1500-2 bus. And when you go back home you transfer 1500-2 bus to 3330 bus. >>You will transer from 3330 bus to 1500-2 bus and then when you go back home, you will transfer again from 1500-2 bus to 3330.In one monthe you will go to office 25 times at least. >>In a month, you have to go to the office 25 times at least. If transfer disccount rate is decreased from 200won to 100won you will pay 5000won more than before that taxis should not be classified as a form of public transport. >>If the transfer discount rate is decreased from 200 won to 100 won, you will pay 5000 won, that is more than what people pay before so taxis should not be classified as a form of public transportation.Consequently you must more pay 5000won when transfer disccount rate is decreased to 100won. >>Consequently, you must pay 5000 won more if the transfer discount rate is to be decreased by a hundred won.So I think, taxis should not be classified as a form of public transport. >>So I think taxis should not be classified as a form of public transportation.

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