Do you think that television is one of the best inventions of all times? Why? Explain in 5 sentences
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Yes it is. Because you get weather, movie, online courses from them.
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Yes it is. >> Correct
Because you get weather, movie, online courses from them.
>> This is because we can get information on weather, movies and online courses from them.
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