Do you think that the clothes we wear reflect our personality?

2020-07-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Yes, I think that the clothes we wear reflects our personality. For example, the heroine in the drama \"it\'s okay not to be okay\" wears very fancy clothes everyday. Wearing fancy clothes is a defense mechanism to hide hurt in her mind. Adding to it, Steve Jobs is well known for always wearing the same clothes. I think it reflect his personality that likes simple things and it was also reflected on the products he developed in Apple.

강사 첨삭

Hey, [이름]. Happy Tuesday. Thank you for sending your homework on a Tuesday. I gladly appreciate it. Hang in there and take it easy. ~Teacher Jane c\",) 


Yes, I think that the clothes we wear reflects our personality.
>>> Yes, I think that the clothes we wear reflect our personality.

For example, the heroine in the drama \"it\'s okay not to be okay\" wears very fancy clothes everyday.
>>> For example, the heroine in the drama \"it\'s okay not to be okay\" wears very fancy clothes every day.

Wearing fancy clothes is a defense mechanism to hide hurt in her mind.
>>> Wearing fancy clothes is a defense mechanism to hide the fact that she is hurting.

Adding to it, Steve Jobs is well known for always wearing the same clothes.
>>> In comparison, Steve Jobs is well known for always wearing the same style of clothes. 

I think it reflect his personality that likes simple things and it was also reflected on the products he developed in Apple.
>>> I think it reflects his personality that he likes simple things and it was also reflected on the products he developed in Apple.

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