Do you think that the death penalty would prevent crime in your country? Why or why not?
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I think death penalty can prevent crime. But it is effective in a case when it will be executed. There is a death penalty in Korea, but it does not actually carry out the death penalty. But we should take care of the possibility of executing innocent people.
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I think death penalty can prevent crime.
>>Correct!
But it is effective in a case when it will be executed.
>> However, it is effective in the event that it is carried out.
There is a death penalty in Korea, but it does not actually carry out the death penalty.
>> In Korea, there is a death penalty, but it is not actually used.
But we should take care of the possibility of executing innocent people.
>> However, we must be cautious of the possibility of executing innocent people.
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