Do you think that the idea of bucket list is only for kids and the sick ones?
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I think everyone has their own bucket list. I remember that I would like to be a doctor, the president, a scientist and so on. It is one of the bucket list. I think dream and ambition can be a bucket list too. Every moments, people dream what they want to do.
Things don\'t look like valuable also can be a bucket list for someone. However, we all live under the busy life so people even don\'t have time to think about their bucket list. It was good chance for me to think about this issues. I was thinking what I want to do before kick the bucket. I am eager to learn playing a guitar. Someday, I will hold my concert regardless that is a solo concert or group performance.
It will make me crazy and excited.
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Teacher Annie (^^)
Do you think that the idea of bucket list is only for kids and the sick ones?
I think everyone has their own bucket list.
>>> CORRECT
I remember that I would like to be a doctor, the president, a scientist and so on.
>>> CORRECT
It is one of the bucket list. I think dream and ambition can be a bucket list too.
>>> It is an example of a bucket list. I think our dream and ambition can be a bucket list too.
Every moments, people dream what they want to do.
>>> Every moment, each person dreams of what they want to be.
Things don\'t look like valuable also can be a bucket list for someone.
>>> Things that don\'t seem valuable can also be a bucket list for someone.
However, we all live under the busy life so people even don\'t have time to think about their bucket list.
>>> However, we all live under a very busy life, so people even don\'t have time to think about their bucket list.
It was good chance for me to think about this issues.
>>> It was a good chance for me to think about this issues.
I was thinking what I want to do before kick the bucket.
>>> I was thinking what I really want to do before I kick the bucket.
I am eager to learn playing a guitar.
>>> CORRECT
Someday, I will hold my concert regardless that is a solo concert or group performance.
>>> Someday, I will hold my own concert whether it\'s a solo or group performance.
It will make me crazy and excited.
>>> It will surely make me crazy and excited.
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