Do you think that the internet and television will eventually make books obsolete?
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Books will definitely not be useless because many people still want to read paper books instead of ebooks. TV and computer is also nice device to get an information. However, I don\'t think it can replace books. It is true that people regularly check their smart phone to read news, play games or watch movies. It cause that some book and newspaper company were bankrupted. Because it is the fastest way to get new information. I used to read books through ebooks however I can focus on reading a book because of bright and small screen small. I also felt tired, if I watch a monitor for a long time. There is no wonder that most people in any field have used computers in the company and feel tired from the watching monitors. I believe that any devices and materials can\'t replace of books. Book is the main things to get knowledge. I believe that book will not be disappeared from our lives.
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Books will definitely not be useless because many people still want to read paper books instead of ebooks. >> CORRECT
TV and computer is also nice device to get an information.
>> TV and computers are also nice devices to get an information.
OR>> TV and computers are also good sources of information.
However, I don\'t think it can replace books.
>> CORRECT
It is true that people regularly check their smart phone to read news, play games or watch movies.
>> CORRECT
It causes some book and newspaper company to be bankrupted because it is the fastest way to get new information.
>> They cause some book and newspaper companies to be bankrupted because these are the fastest way to get new information.
I used to read books through ebooks however I can focus on reading a book because of bright and small screen small.
>> I used to read books through ebooks, however, I can\'t focus on reading a book because of my phone\'s bright and small screen.
I also felt tired, if I watch a monitor for a long time.
>> CORRECT
There is no wonder that most people in any field have used computers in the company and feel tired from the watching monitors.
>> There is no wonder why most people in any field have used computers in the company and feel tired from watching monitors.
I believe that any devices and materials can\'t replace of books.
>> I believe that any device or material can\'t replace books.
Book is the main things to get knowledge.
>> Books are the main sources of knowledge.
I believe that book will not be disappeared from our lives.
>> I believe that books will not disappear from our lives.
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