Do you think that the owner of the ship and the people who were in charge during the accident should

Hello there!:)

I was watching the videos of the rescue units in your place while checking your composition.

It is really shocking and heartbreaking. I cannot imagine my kid benign in that case that\'s why I heartily sympathized to the parents who lost their kids.

I must have killed myself if I am in their shoes. :(

Let\'s just pray for their souls.

See you in class.

Teacher Rowena

I think that the owner of the Sewol ferry and the people who were in charge during the accident shold be penalized.

>> CORRECT! // should //

First, the captain and the crew didn’t take care of their passengers.

>> CORRECT!  // didn\'t //

The report said they escaped from the sunken ship at the very first.

>> The report said they escaped from the sunken ship  first.

As the result, they caused many casualties, more than 300.

>> CORRECT! 

The matters make worse, most of the dead are high school students on their way to field trip.

>> Do you mean: The worst thing is most of the dead are high school students on their way to a field trip.

Secondly, there’s no proper evacuation drill for passengers before the ship sailed.

>> CORRECT! 

That means the captain the crew ignored the basic principle which they must do.

>> That means the captain and the crews ignored the basic principle which they must do.

Thirdly, all the owners of ships must supervise the safety of the ship and train their crew including captains for the safe sailing.

>> Thirdly, all owners of ships must supervise the safety of the ship and train their crews including the captains for a safe sailing.

Nevertheless, the owner of the Sewol ferry was negligent of his responsibilities.

>> CORRECT! 

Therefore, the people who are related to the accident are definitely punished.

>> CORRECT!