Do you think that the person having the birthday should pay for the birthday party or should their f
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I think someone with my birthday party needs to pay money for birthday party.Because he\'s birthday, it\'s because the host is your birthday.I think I have to pay money for party because I receive a birthday gift.Other people gave me a gift, but he\'s money to the party.
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I think someone with my birthday party needs to pay money for birthday party.
>>> I think someone with my birthday party needs to pay money for a birthday party.
Because he\'s birthday, it\'s because the host is your birthday.
>>> Because it\'s your birthday, it\'s because the host is your birthday.
I think I have to pay money for party because I receive a birthday gift.
>>> I think I have to pay money for the party because I receive a birthday gift.
Other people gave me a gift, but he\'s money to the party.
>>> Other people gave me a gift, but he\'s money for the party.
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