Do you think that there is a relation between global warming and cars?
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Cars correlate with global warning. A transportation sector is one of the key contributors to greenhouse gas emissions. There was the 15th Climate Change Conference of the Parties in Nov. 2009 and Korean President Mr. [Name] pledged to reduce greenhouse gas by 30 percent by 2020. It was the Korean government’s commitment to the international community. As follow-up, the greenhouse gas reduction target in transportation sector was determined to be 34.2Million ton in the Korea’s National Greenhouse Reduction roadmap. The greenhouse gas reduction target for vehicles was set at 17.8Mil. ton. In order for the government to achieve the target, it is planning to strengthen the current CO2 emission standard for vehicles. Automobile manufacturers are required to improve fuel economy by almost 30% by 2020 to meet the standard. The better fuel economy is, the less emissions are produced by vehicles. Automobile manufacturers are strongly against the target because it is too ambitious.
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Cars correlate with global warning.
>> Correct!
A transportation sector is one of the key contributors to greenhouse gas emissions.
>> Correct!
There was the 15th Climate Change Conference of the Parties in Nov. 2009 and Korean President Mr. [Name] pledged to reduce greenhouse gas by 30 percent by 2020.
>> Correct!
It was the Korean government’s commitment to the international community.
>> Correct!
As follow-up, the greenhouse gas reduction target in transportation sector was determined to be 34.2Million ton in the Korea’s National Greenhouse Reduction roadmap.
>> Correct!
The greenhouse gas reduction target for vehicles was set at 17.8Mil. ton.
>> Correct!
In order for the government to achieve the target, it is planning to strengthen the current CO2 emission standard for vehicles.
>> In order for the government to achieve the target, they are planning to strengthen the current CO2 emission standard for vehicles.
Automobile manufacturers are required to improve fuel economy by almost 30% by 2020 to meet the standard.
>> Correct!
The better fuel economy is, the less emissions are produced by vehicles.
>> Correct!
Automobile manufacturers are strongly against the target because it is too ambitious.
>> Correct!
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