Do you think that there is a soulmate somewhere for everyone?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think there is a soulmate for everyone. I believe the fate and the connection between person and person.
In a friendship case, there is a soulmate.And love either.
And I\'ve heard there is a timing to meet the soulmate for everyone in ther life and people should not miss that opportunity.
So, if people go through a hard time because of a relationship between friends, coworkers or a lover, they dont have to cry.
It\'s because there will be the man who matches me entirely.
.. But I\'m so sad for the police man who I said to you yesterday.. maybe there may be a soulmate for me in the future. Better than him!!
강사 첨삭
Hello Gem!
How romantic the topic is! I really wish we both find out soulmates soon. Anyway, great job with the writing. See you next week! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT! (NOTE: Is my soulmate born yet? lol)
I believe the fate and the connection between person and person.
>>I believe in fate and the connection between people.
In a friendship case, there is a soulmate.And love either.
In a friendship case, there is a soulmate.And love either.
>>In friendship\'s case, there is a soulmate and there is love too.
And I\'ve heard there is a timing to meet the soulmate for everyone in ther life and people should not miss that opportunity.
And I\'ve heard there is a timing to meet the soulmate for everyone in ther life and people should not miss that opportunity.
>>And I\'ve heard there is perfect timing in meeting our soulmates in life and people should not miss that opportunity.
So, if people go through a hard time because of a relationship between friends, coworkers or a lover, they dont have to cry.
So, if people go through a hard time because of a relationship between friends, coworkers or a lover, they dont have to cry.
>>So, if people go through a hard time because of a relationship between friends, coworkers or a lover, they don\'t have to cry.
It\'s because there will be the man who matches me entirely.
It\'s because there will be the man who matches me entirely.
>>CORRECT! (NOTE: This is so beautifully said!)
>>OR: It\'s because there will be the man who matches me perfectly.
But I\'m so sad for the police man who I said to you yesterday.. maybe there may be a soulmate for me in the future. Better than him!!
But I\'m so sad for the police man who I said to you yesterday.. maybe there may be a soulmate for me in the future. Better than him!!
>>However, I\'m so sad about the policeman I told you about yesterday. Maybe there will be a soulmate for me in the future, someone better than him!
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