Do you think that TV makes people lazy?

2021-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I don\'t think so. TV provides a lot of information to people and entertains us. Also, I think TV is essential in our lives because it allows us to know the trends these days.

강사 첨삭

Hello Nana!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart per[이름] and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I don\'t think so. 

>> CORRECT!

TV provides a lot of information to people and entertains us. 

>> TV provides a lot of information to people and it entertains us. 

Also, I think TV is essential in our lives because it allows us to know the trends these days.

>> CORRECT!

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