Do you think that we can do away from using chemical- based products?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that we can`t do away from using chemical-based product for the follow reasons.
First, To be replaced with it , we have to find raw-materials from the nature. Even though the scientists find out that material, that kind of product`s price will be higher than chemical products. Because of enconomic crisis and recession, Most people prefer to using chemical products.
Second, The company which release chemical product develops more eco-friendly chemical product. Despite of their efforts, fatal issue will be continued and they will consistently make an effot to develop better items.
I think to prevent co[이름]g up safety problems, the government make guideline for strict standard to the manufacturer.
강사 첨삭
Hello there JM!
If we lived in an era free from chemicals then that would have been many hundreds of years before. You are absolutely correct. From the time we wake up up until we sleep, we use chemicals, we inhale chemicals. Living without them would be difficult. After all, these were concocted to make our lives better.
In the event that there are some harmful side effects, companies are ready to correct to mistakes as their names are also at stake.
Thanks for this very good answer. Catch you again later in class.
-T. Donna =)
>> I think that we can`t do away from using chemical-based product for the following reasons.
First, To be replaced with it , we have to find raw-materials from the nature.
>> First, to be replaced them , we have to find raw-materials from nature.
Even though the scientists find out that material, that kind of product`s price will be higher than chemical products.
>> Even though scientists found out those materials, those kinds of products\' price will be higher than the chemical-based products.
Because of enconomic crisis and recession, Most people prefer to using chemical products.
>> Correct!
Or>> Because of the economic crisis and the recession, most people prefer to use chemical-based products.
Second, The company which release chemical product develops more eco-friendly chemical product.
>> Second, the company which releases chemical products develops more eco-friendly chemical products.
Despite of their efforts, fatal issue will be continued and they will consistently make an effot to develop better items.
>> Despite of their efforts, fatal issues will continue and they will consistently make an effort to develop better items.
I think to prevent co[이름]g up safety problems, the government make guideline for strict standard to the manufacturer.
>> I think to prevent safety problems, the government should make guidelines for strict standards to the manufacturers.
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