Do you think that women should also join the military there in Korea? Why or why not?
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Maybe not right now. but in a few decades women will have to go to the military. Now in Korea, almost 99 percent of men are serving in the military. Because the military service period being reduced, but there are no people, so the number of people selected from the military is increasing. And even worse, the problem of low birth rate in Korea is so serious that it will get worse. So I think women should think seriously about going to the army.
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Hi Steve! Women joining the military has been a big controversy in South Korea. There has been speculations that it promotes gender inequality. I think that they should allow women to join the military but not mandatorily. Only the volunteers shall enter it because some women are not capable of doing things like that. If you have the ability, then you can. But if you don\'t, it\'s fine. :) Thanks for sharing your opinion.
Maybe not right now. but in a few decades women will have to go to the military.
>>Maybe not right now but in a few decades, women will have to go to the military.
Now in Korea, almost 99 percent of men are serving in the military.
>>CORRECT
Because the military service period being reduced, but there are no people, so the number of people selected from the military is increasing.
>>Since the military service period is being reduced, there are not a lot of people who is serving it. So mandatory service is increasing.
And even worse, the problem of low birth rate in Korea is so serious that it will get worse.
>>The low birth rate in Korea is making it worse.
So I think women should think seriously about going to the army.
>> CORRECT
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