Do you think that your country is changing rapidly?
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I think my country is changing rapidly. It seems like the environment is very different now than when I was young. I\'m surprised when I go back to the place I lived when I was young.
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I think my country is changing rapidly. It seems like the environment is very different now than when I was young. I\'m surprised when I go back to the place I lived when I was young.
>> I think my country is changing rapidly. The environment seems very different now compared to when I was young. I’m always surprised when I visit the place where I lived as a child.
>> I think my country is changing rapidly. The environment seems very different now compared to when I was young. I’m always surprised when I visit the place where I lived as a child.
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