Do you think that your country is changing rapidly?
학생이 쓴 원문
My country has changed rapidly, however it\'s not a good changing.
The birth rate in Korea has decreased rapidly last few years.
The number of children in elementary school is lower alomst 70% than my ages.
It is bad news for Korea.
강사 첨삭
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My country has changed rapidly, however it\'s not a good changing.
>> My country has changed rapidly, but not in a good way.
OR >> Korea has undergone rapid changes, but unfortunately, not for the better.
The birth rate in Korea has decreased rapidly last few years.
>> The birth rate in Korea has dropped significantly over the past few years.
The number of children in elementary school is lower alomst 70% than my ages.
>> The number of children in elementary school is almost 70% lower compared to when I was their age.
It is bad news for Korea.
>> CORRECT
OR >> This is a concerning trend for the future of the country.
>> My country has changed rapidly, but not in a good way.
OR >> Korea has undergone rapid changes, but unfortunately, not for the better.
The birth rate in Korea has decreased rapidly last few years.
>> The birth rate in Korea has dropped significantly over the past few years.
The number of children in elementary school is lower alomst 70% than my ages.
>> The number of children in elementary school is almost 70% lower compared to when I was their age.
It is bad news for Korea.
>> CORRECT
OR >> This is a concerning trend for the future of the country.
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