Do you think the brand matter?

2023-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Nikki

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I think the brand does not matter, at least for me. Because there’re a lot of clothes that have bad quality among famous brands. As i get older i may care about how expensive or famous brand the clothes is. But now it’s more important how it looks cool and have good quality for its price.

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I think the brand does not matter, at least for me. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> For me, the brand doesn\'t matter at all.

Because there’re a lot of clothes that have bad quality among famous brands.
>> There are a lot of branded clothes that have a really bad quality. 

 As i get older i may care about how expensive or famous brand the clothes is. 
>> While growing up, I used to care about how expensive or famous a clothing brand was.


But now it’s more important how it looks cool and have good quality for its price.
>> But now,  It is more important to have affordable clothes that look good and with good quality. 


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