Do you think the covid-19 outbreak also brought benefits? If yes, what are they?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have spent a lot of time to think about benefits of covid-19 outbreak because it is the strongest contagious disease that people were infected since we could exam patients with proper tools. The number of cases are increasing everyday all around world. Europe seems like the countries that can be serious situation. The benefits we got from Covid-19 is that to get knowledge how to protect ourselves from the disease. We all know that make is one of the important items. People have been suffering to get masks after corona virus epidemic.
We practice to wash our hands frequently with soup and alcohol. This is the best benefits we had because people didn\'t know how important hand hygiene is. I believe that we will continue to wash our hands every time after this crisis.
I think that\'s all of the benefits from the Covid-19. I hope we just terminate this virus and no more patients around the world.
강사 첨삭
Happy Wednesday, Mr. [이름]! How is everything there? It\'s not looking so good here. Oh my!
Anyway, thanks so much for your answers. We\'ll try to discuss further about this in class. See you! ^^
-Avery
I have spent a lot of time to think about benefits of covid-19 outbreak because it is the strongest contagious disease that people were infected since we could exam patients with proper tools.
>> I have spent a lot of time thinking about the benefits of covid-19 outbreak because it is the strongest contagious disease that people were infected by, since we could examine patients using proper tools.
The number of cases are increasing everyday all around world.
>> CORRECT
Europe seems like the countries that can be serious situation.
>> Europe seems like the continent that is in a serious situation.
The benefits we got from Covid-19 is that to get knowledge how to protect ourselves from the disease.
>> One benefit we got from Covid-19 is getting the knowledge on how to protect ourselves from the disease.
We all know that make is one of the important items.
>> We all know that masks are some of the most important items nowadays.
People have been suffering to get masks after corona virus epidemic.
>> CORRECT
OR>> People have been struggling to get masks after the corona virus epidemic.
We practice to wash our hands frequently with soup and alcohol.
>> CORRECT
This is the best benefits we had because people didn\'t know how important hand hygiene is.
>> This is the best benefit we had because people didn\'t know how important hand hygiene is.
I believe that we will continue to wash our hands every time after this crisis.
>> CORRECT
I think that\'s all of the benefits from the Covid-19.
>> I think those are the only benefits we get from the Covid-19.
I hope we just terminate this virus and no more patients around the world.
>> I hope we just terminate this virus and have no more patients around the world.
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