Do you think the covid-19 outbreak also brought benefits? If yes, what are they?
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Do you think the covid-19 outbreak also brought benefits? If yes, what are they?
My answer is totally “NO”. I think Covid-19(=C) is an incomparable infectious diseases with the other ones. Even though C’ve had many benefits such as washings hands, wearing a mask, I think falling down my daily life is heavier issue than benefits.
What I lose due to C.
First. Normal school life.
Because I entered the college later than my friends, The time spending in the school with friends is special for me.
Second, Money waste.
My hometown is far from my college. I lived nation dormitory for three months. When I lived there, Monthly rent was cheap. It was similar with an underdeveloped city. However I moved last June because of Public transport. It took almost one hour. The time is okay. However I took two subways, one bus. It gave me a lot of stress and fatigue. Anyway my monthly rent is almost 400$ now. What a waste! (SSAYANG!!! I learned ssayang mean is similar with waste)
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Hey there, pretty Cathy! Thank you for sending in your homework! Where did you learn that Filipino word? Daebak! ^^
I hope to see you soon. Have the best Thursday! ^^
-Avery
My answer is totally “NO”. >> CORRECT
I think Covid-19(=C) is an incomparable infectious diseases with the other ones.
>> I think Covid-19(=C) incomparable to other infectious diseases.
Even though C’ve had many benefits such as washings hands, wearing a mask, I think falling down my daily life is heavier issue than benefits.
>> Even though C’ve had many benefits such as washing hands, wearing a mask, I think it has heavier issues than benefits.
What I lose due to C. First. Normal school life.
>> The first thing I\'ve lost due to C is having a normal school life.
Because I entered the college later than my friends, The time spending in the school with friends is special for me.
>> Even though C’ve had many benefits such as washing hands, wearing a mask, I think it has heavier issues than benefits.
What I lose due to C. First. Normal school life.
>> The first thing I\'ve lost due to C is having a normal school life.
Because I entered the college later than my friends, The time spending in the school with friends is special for me.
>> Because I entered college later than my friends, the time I spend in school with friends is special for me.
Second, Money waste.
Second, Money waste.
>> Secondly, money is wasted.
My hometown is far from my college.
My hometown is far from my college.
>> CORRECT
I lived nation dormitory for three months.
>> I lived in the national dormitory for three months.
When I lived there, Monthly rent was cheap.
>> When I lived there, the monthly rent was cheap.
It was similar with an underdeveloped city.
>> CORRECT
However I moved last June because of Public transport.
>> However, I moved last June because the public transportation was a problem.
It took almost one hour.
>> CORRECT
The time is okay.
>> CORRECT
OR>> The time was not really a problem.
However I took two subways, one bus.
>> However, I took two subways and one bus.
It gave me a lot of stress and fatigue.
>> CORRECT
Anyway my monthly rent is almost 400$ now.
>> CORRECT
What a waste! (SSAYANG!!! I learned ssayang mean is similar with waste)
>> CORRECT! ^^
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