Do you think the death penalty is ever justified?
학생이 쓴 원문
If someone committed a crime enough to put him to death, he can\'t be forgiven from victim. I think child sexual violation is included in this case, and death penalty is week as punishment. Because death penalty is only one moment, but the victim live in pain and trauma for the rest of her life. Therefore, I think death penalty is insufficient to make someone realize his fault.
On the other perspective, if judge mistakenly sentences a death penalty, it can\'t be turning back. And there\'s any chance to prove someone\'s innocence.
As a result, I think death penalty isn\'t justified in many ways.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mary! You presented a strong and thoughtful argument, especially by considering both the victim’s suffering and the risk of wrongful punishment. Your ideas are deep and mature, and you clearly understand the ethical complexity of the death penalty. To improve further, focus on grammar accuracy, clearer sentence structure, and more natural phrasing. You’re doing very well!
-Teacher Wela
If someone committed a crime enough to put him to death, he can\'t be forgiven from victim.
>> If someone commits a crime serious enough to deserve the death penalty, that person cannot be forgiven by the victim.
Because death penalty is only one moment, but the victim live in pain and trauma for the rest of her life.
>> This is because the death penalty happens in a single moment, but the victim lives with pain and trauma for the rest of her life.
On the other perspective, if judge mistakenly sentences a death penalty, it can\'t be turning back.
>> On the other hand, if a judge mistakenly sentences someone to death, the decision cannot be reversed.
And there\'s any chance to prove someone\'s innocence.
>> And there is no chance to prove that person’s innocence.
As a result, I think death penalty isn\'t justified in many ways.
>> As a result, I think the death penalty is not justified in many ways.
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