Do you think the death penalty should be used to help reduce crime?
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Yes, I personally think that only a strong punishment should prevent the crime. You got a weak for punishment even if you did a lot of crimes, you want to do it continuously. But on the other hand, if you did a crime whether a serous criminal offense or not, you won\'t think to do it. So I strongly agree with that, a punishment will be strict in my country.
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Fabulous Monday, Elic! Utilize every moment to prepare your mind and body for future endeavors. Succeeding in life is easy as long as you believe in yourself. Trust yourself, and success will come along.
Yes, I personally think that only a strong punishment should prevent the crime.
>>> Yes, I personally think that only a strong punishment should prevent the crime.
You got a weak for punishment even if you did a lot of crimes, you want to do it continuously.
>>> You\'ve got a weak stomach for punishment, even if you committed a lot of crimes. You want to do it continuously.
But on the other hand, if you did a crime whether a serous criminal offense or not, you won\'t think to do it.
>>> But on the other hand, if you committed a crime, whether a serious criminal offense or not, you wouldn\'t think to do it.
So I strongly agree with that, a punishment will be strict in my country.
>>> So I strongly agree with that; a punishment should be strict in my country.
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