Do you think the design or arrangement of your room or house is significant to you?
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I think it is important to me and I recommend to design and arrangement own room and house.
There are some reasons why I think like that.
First, if I arrange my room and house, it makes me feel clean and peace and also I can find my item very quickly by I arrange that myself.
Second is if I have a chance to design my own room and house, I think it also makes me more responsible to my house. And I can arrange and design very effectively following my life routine.
Of course, if I arrange all things related house and room, it will not be easy because there are lots of thing if I check to do delicately.
Despite, I think positive things will be more than negative things by doing arrangement or participating design my own things.
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Thank you for this Sir Kyoung Ho. I think so too. Being involved in decorating your house and room would be more personal and sentimental.
I think it is important to me and I recommend to design and arrangement own room and house.
>>> I think it is important to me and I recommend to design and arrange my own room and house.
There are some reasons why I think like that.
>>> correct
First, if I arrange my room and house, it makes me feel clean and peace and also I can find my item very quickly by I arrange that myself.
>>> First, if I arrange my room and house, it makes me feel clean and at peace and also I can find my items very quickly by arranging that myself.
Second is if I have a chance to design my own room and house, I think it also makes me more responsible to my house.
>>> I think it is important to me and I recommend to design and arrange my own room and house.
There are some reasons why I think like that.
>>> correct
First, if I arrange my room and house, it makes me feel clean and peace and also I can find my item very quickly by I arrange that myself.
>>> First, if I arrange my room and house, it makes me feel clean and at peace and also I can find my items very quickly by arranging that myself.
Second is if I have a chance to design my own room and house, I think it also makes me more responsible to my house.
>>> correct
And I can arrange and design very effectively following my life routine.
>>> correct
Of course, if I arrange all things related house and room, it will not be easy because there are lots of thing if I check to do delicately.
>>> Of course, if I arrange all things related to house and room, it will not be easy because there are lots of things if I check to do them delicately.
Despite, I think positive things will be more than negative things by doing arrangement or participating design my own things.
>>> correct
Of course, if I arrange all things related house and room, it will not be easy because there are lots of thing if I check to do delicately.
>>> Of course, if I arrange all things related to house and room, it will not be easy because there are lots of things if I check to do them delicately.
Despite, I think positive things will be more than negative things by doing arrangement or participating design my own things.
>>> Despite it, I think positive things will be more than negative things by doing arrangement or participating in the design of my own things.
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