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I think that the desktop computer will become less popular in the future. and the laptop computer will replace it.
>> I think that the desktop computer will become less popular in the future and the laptop computer will replace it.
Actually, many people prefer the laptop computer than it.
>> Actually, many people prefer a laptop computer than a desktop computer.
Because nowadays the laptop computer has a same quality that the desktop computer has.
>> Because nowadays a laptop computer has the same quality with a desktop computer.
In addition, it has other advantages that it is portable and has became lighter.
>> In addition, it is portable and lighter.
And in my opinion, we will use a mobile phone as a computer in the further future.
>> And in my opinion, we will use a mobile phone as a computer in the future.
Because it already has a similar function that surfing the website, checking e-mails, writing documents and science is being developed.
>> Because it already has similar features for surfing the internet, checking e-mails, and writing documents. Science is being developed.
So I can imagine that it substitute the desktop computer.
>> So, I can imagine that it can substitute the desktop computer.
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