Do you think the emotion of hate will ever disappear from humans?
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If every person doesn’t have an equivalent property, humans will never lose hate. I believe the theory that human nature is fundamentally evil, so hating other people or other things is human’s natural feeling. I also think environment makes people’s feelings. If there are only happy occasions, people never feel hate. However, there is a person who feel hate although s/he is happy at a moment. Therefore, hate will never disappear from humans.
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Thank you for finding time to answer your homework and for sharing your thoughts about our topic.
Hate is too great a burden to bear so we should decide to stick with love according to Martin Luther King.
~Kelly^^
If every person doesn’t have an equivalent property, humans will never lose hate. >> Correct.
I believe the theory that human nature is fundamentally evil, so hating other people or other things is human’s natural feeling.
>> Correct.
I also think environment makes people’s feelings.
>> I also think the environment affects people’s feelings.
If there are only happy occasions, people never feel hate.
>> If there are only happy occasions, people will never feel hate.
However, there is a person who feel hate although s/he is happy at a moment.
>> However, there is a person who feels hate although she/he is happy at a moment.
Therefore, hate will never disappear from humans.
>> Correct.
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