Do you think the future will be better or worse for your grandchildren?
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T[이름]k you for doing your homework. You did well in sharing your thoughts and ideas in answering the question.
I really hope and pray that our grandchildren will have a bright future.
-Teacher Shelly-
Life is a fair.
>>> Life is not fair.
For example, if I earn something, the other side I lose some.
>>> Correct!
When I was sick, If I take some medicine, for a long time. I get better sometimes but get some side effect.
>>> When I got sick when I took some medicine for a long time, I get better sometimes but there were side effects.
Our grandchildren generation,they might be good life,but, young parents need more responsibility.
>>> In our grandchildren\'s generation, they might have a good life but young parents need to do a lot of responsibilities.
Many things are opening If kid want to do they can do it.
>>>There are many opportunities for children if they want to do something they want to do, they can do it.
21centry will c[이름]ge a lot,but basic things always same.
>>> In the 21st century, there will be a lot of c[이름]ges, the basic things will always stay the same.
keep the own country culture, and identity.They will be fine.
>>> Keeping their own country\'s culture and identity, they will be fine.
This days kid grow very isolated.
>>> These days kids are isolated.
Maybe art education is good for next generation.
>>> Maybe learning art is good for the next generation.
I hope our grandchildren will be bright future.
>>> I hope our grandchildren will have a bright future.
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