Do you think the future will be better or worse for your grandchildren?

2018-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Shelly

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Life is a fair. For example, If I earn something, the other side I loose some. When I was sick, If I take some medicine, for a long time. I get better sometimes but get some side effect. Our grandchildren generation,they might be good life,but, young parents need more responsibility. Many things are opening If kid want to do they can do it. 21centry will c[이름]ge a lot,but basic things always same. keep the own country culture, and identity. They will be fine. This days kid grow very isolated. Maybe art education is good for next generation. I hope our grandchildren will be bright future.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, [이름]nah!

T[이름]k you for doing your homework. You did well in sharing your thoughts and ideas in answering the question.

I really hope and pray that our grandchildren will have a bright future.


-Teacher Shelly-


Life is a fair.

>>> Life is not fair.

For example, if I earn something, the other side I lose some.

>>> Correct!
 When I was sick, If I take some medicine, for a long time. I get better sometimes but get some side effect.

>>> When I got sick when I took some medicine for a long time, I get better sometimes but there were side effects.

Our grandchildren generation,they might be good life,but, young parents need more responsibility.

>>> In our grandchildren\'s generation, they might have a good life but young parents need to do a lot of responsibilities.
 Many things are opening If kid want to do they can do it.

>>>There are many opportunities for children if they want to do something they want to do, they can do it.
 21centry will c[이름]ge a lot,but basic things always same.

>>> In the 21st century, there will be a lot of c[이름]ges, the basic things will always stay the same.
 keep the own country culture, and identity.They will be fine.

>>> Keeping their own country\'s culture and identity, they will be fine.

This days kid grow very isolated.

>>> These days kids are isolated.
 Maybe art education is good for next generation.

>>> Maybe learning art is good for the next generation.
 I hope our grandchildren will be bright future.

>>> I hope our grandchildren will have a bright future.

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