Do you think the government should create jobs for the homeless, instead of just giving them money?
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absolutely, former one
let\'s think about later one.
now In Korea is worrying about how to divide money.
because of this emergency situation, the government has to separate subsidiary but they don\'t know how to do.
how to divide there level?
if someone give money for everyone who are more poor, all people will say \"me! me! i am the best poor people. like this.
overall i mean there is no exact criteria, that\'s why now government keep delaying to separate subsidiary.
they don\'t know exactly
SO if government wants to help them, they\'d better create job for homeless
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absolutely, former one
>> I would absolutely go for the former one.
let\'s think about later one.
let\'s think about later one.
>> Let\'s think about the latter one.
now In Korea is worrying about how to divide money.
now In Korea is worrying about how to divide money.
>> Now in Korea, people are worrying about how to divide the money.
because of this emergency situation, the government has to separate subsidiary but they don\'t know how to do.
how to divide there level?
because of this emergency situation, the government has to separate subsidiary but they don\'t know how to do.
how to divide there level?
>> Because of this emergency situation, the government has to allot/assign subsidies but they don\'t know how to do it and how to divide their levels.
if someone give money for everyone who are more poor, all people will say \"me! me! i am the best poor people. like this.
if someone give money for everyone who are more poor, all people will say \"me! me! i am the best poor people. like this.
>> If someone allots money to all poor people, others will say they are the poorest.
overall i mean there is no exact criteria, that\'s why now government keep delaying to separate subsidiary.
>> Overall, I mean there is no exact criteria, so the government keeps delaying the separation of subsidies.
they don\'t know exactly. SO if government wants to help them, they\'d better create job for homeless.
overall i mean there is no exact criteria, that\'s why now government keep delaying to separate subsidiary.
>> Overall, I mean there is no exact criteria, so the government keeps delaying the separation of subsidies.
they don\'t know exactly. SO if government wants to help them, they\'d better create job for homeless.
>> They don\'t know what to do exactly, so if the government wants to help them, they\'d better create jobs for the homeless.
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