Do you think the Internet is the best invention?
학생이 쓴 원문
The internet is great invention, I agree with it.
However, it is not a best invention.
Internet was created only 30 years ago.
However, wheel and paper was invented few thousands years ago and human still use it.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
The internet is great invention, I agree with it.
>> The internet is a great invention, and I agree with that.
However, it is not a best invention.
>> CORRECT
OR >> However, it is not the greatest invention.
Internet was created only 30 years ago. However, wheel and paper was invented few thousands years ago and human still use it.
>> The internet was created only 30 years ago, whereas the wheel and paper were invented thousands of years ago, and humans still use them today.
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