Do you think the lines on your palm are more about destiny or free will?
학생이 쓴 원문
No,I think free will is important more than palm lines.
Of course , I bilive a little destiny or fourtune but
it\'s up to us, if we want eagaerly and don\'t give up ,we can do everying.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ju Mi! I think so, too. Free will means having the power to make our own choices. ^^ Thank you for doing your homework. Have a great week ahead.
~T. Jewel
No,I think free will is important more than palm lines.
>>No, I think free will is more important than palm lines.
Of course , I bilive a little destiny or fourtune
Of course , I bilive a little destiny or fourtune
>>Of course, I believe a little in destiny or fortune.
but it\'s up to us, if we want eagaerly and don\'t give up ,we can do everying.
>>But it\'s up to us—if we want something eagerly and don\'t give up, we can do anything.
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