Do you think the news is necessary?
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Yes because we have to watch how many people are infected and dead these days. And be careful not to infected in corona virus.
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Hello Ellie!
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Have a good weekend~
Yes because we have to watch how many people are infected and dead these days.
>> Yes, because we have to know how many people are infected and dead these days.
And be careful not to infected in corona virus.
>> We should also be careful so that we will not get infected by the corona virus.
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