Do you think the past was better than the present? Why or why not?
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I think the past better than the present. Because when the past, I didn\'t have any stress. But now I have a lot of stress about relationships with people, employment, and my future. But the present also not that bad. The present can do more a lot experience, can face a lot diversity than the past. Nevertheless I think the past more than better the present.
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Because when the past, I didn\'t have any stress.
>>It\'s because in the past, I didn\'t have any stress.
But now I have a lot of stress about relationships with people, employment, and my future.
>>But now I have a lot of stress with my relationships with people, employment, and my future.
But the present also not that bad.
>>But still, the present is also not that bad.
The present can do more a lot experience, can face a lot diversity than the past.
>>In the present, I can have a lot more experiences and I can face a lot more changes than the past.
Nevertheless I think the past more than better the present.
>>Nevertheless, I still think that the past is better than the present.
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