Do you think the school day should be longer or shorter than it is or it is just right?
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I think the school day now is just right. If it becomes longer or shorter it would be kind of hard for me to get used to it. I never want the school day to become longer because I don’t want my vacation gets shorter anymore. If the school day becomes shorter I’m sure I will be able to waist time playing a lot more video games. I like playing and relaxing but I think I need to live a regular life as going to school.
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I think the school day now is just right. If it becomes longer or
shorter it would be kind of hard for me to get used to it. I never want
the school day to become longer because I don’t want my vacation gets
shorter anymore. If the school day becomes shorter I’m sure I will be
able to waist time playing a lot more video games. I like playing and
relaxing but I think I need to live a regular life as going to school.
>> I think the school day now is just right. If it becomes longer or
shorter it would be kind of hard for me to get used to it. I never want
the school day to become longer because I don’t want my vacation to get
shorter. If the school day becomes shorter I’m sure I will be wasting my time playing a lot of video games. I like playing and
relaxing but I think I need to live a regular life like going to school.
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