Do you think the sports page is important? WHY?
학생이 쓴 원문
Ii think the sport page is important because sport is very cool and good page in newspaper.
So I think the sport page is important.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jimmy!
Here is your second revised composition for today. The corrected version is shown below.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Do you think the sports page is important? WHY?
I think the sport page is important because sport is very cool and good page in newspaper.
>>> I think the sports page is important because sports are fun and interesting.
So I think the sport page is important.
>>> That’s why I think the sports page matters.
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