Do you think the technology that we have right now is effective in letting people communicate? Why o
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The recently developed high-tech gadgets come in handy when we communicate with foreigners. They are effective when you don\'t know the language you\'re hearing now a bit. What you need is just to turn on the language conversing application and let it hear what that foreigner is saying. You can learn what he or she is talking about on the screen of your smartphone. However, you want to have quality talking with foreigners. You should learn the language they\'re using or English.
As the convenience of navigation degenerates the human\'s skill to locate themselves and find the way to their destination, so can downgrade the English translator the passion to learn other languages and their cultures. Although it takes a lot of time and effort to learn a foreign language, it is worthwhile. You deserve a better salary or treatment because you can talk a foreign coworker into your plan or cooperate for better outcomes. This conversation is way above the one made by translator apps. This is real
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Hi, Steve!
Thank you for answering your homework!
Here are some things to take note of:
1. The recently developed high-tech gadgets come in handy when we communicate with foreigners.
>>CORRECT!
2. They are effective when you don\'t know the language you\'re hearing now a bit.
>>They are effective when you don\'t fully understand the language you\'re hearing.
3. What you need is just to turn on the language conversing application and let it hear what that foreigner is saying.
>>All you need to do is turn on the language conversing application and let it hear what that foreigner is saying.
4. You can learn what he or she is talking about on the screen of your smartphone.
>>CORRECT!
5. However, you want to have quality talking with foreigners.
>>However, you want to have quality conversation with the foreigner you\'re talking with.
6. You should learn the language they\'re using or English.
>>You should learn the language they\'re using or perhaps, English.
7. As the convenience of navigation degenerates the human\'s skill to locate themselves and find the way to their destination, so can downgrade the passion to learn other languages and their cultures.
>>As the convenience of navigation degenerates the human\'s skill to locate themselves and find the way to their destination, so can the English translator downgrade the passion to learn other countries\' languages and cultures.
8. Although it takes a lot of time and effort to learn a foreign language, it is worthwhile.
>>CORRECT!
9. You deserve a better salary or treatment because you can talk a foreign coworker into your plan or cooperate for better outcomes.
>>You deserve a better salary or treatment because you can talk to a foreign coworker about your plan or cooperate with him/her for better outcomes.
10. This conversation is way above the one made by translator apps.
>>This conversation is way better than the ones made in translator apps.
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