Do you think the use of cars will increase or decrease in the future? Why?

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I think that the use of cars will increse in the future for several reasons.

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 First of all, the vehicle utilization rate is increasing these days.

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Many workers use their own cars to go work and many parents take their childern to school by using their cars.

>> Many workers use their own cars to go to work and many parents take their childern to school by using their own/ private cars.
Secondly, people are seeking the convenience.

>> Secondly, people are seeking convenience.

 To be specific, people do not like walking with heavy thing and their young baby.

>> To be specific, people do not like walking carrying heavy things with  their young babies.

Because of this phenomenon, many people buy ther own cars although the cost of cars is expensive.

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For these reasons, the car utilization rate will increase in the future.

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