Do you think the world would be a better place without cars?
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I think that It can to be a better place without cars.
Because if there\'re without car,became to clean the air. I don\'t like the yellow dust. I hope the clean air.
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I think that It can to be a better place without cars.
>> I think that it will be a better place without cars.
Because if there\'re without car,became to clean the air.
>> Because if there are no cars, the air will be cleaner.
I don\'t like the yellow dust. I hope the clean air.
>> I don\'t like the yellow dust, I hope the air will become clean.
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