Do you think there are enough doctors in your town?
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I think there are not enough doctors in my town. We are having a trouble finding right clinic when we are sick. Because I live in the small city of countryside. The less population live, The less there are clinic.
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Well done, Angel! I agree with you! One of the disadvantages of living in the countryside is that medical facilities are not complete there. Stay healthy!-Faith-
I think there are not enough doctors in my town. >> CORRECT
We are having a trouble finding right clinic when we are sick. Because I live in the small city of countryside.
>> We are having a trouble finding the right clinic when we are sick because we live in the small countryside.
The less population live, The less there are clinic.
>> The smaller population we have, the fewer clinics there are.
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