Do you think there are really witches and monsters and creatures living amongst us in the real world
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I personally don't believe there are actual supernaturual creatures. There could be some scary and possibly large beasts down in the ocean because it is a big place and we have never explored it thoroughly. However, I do not believe in witches or vampires. Witchcraft is a real religion and a real practice, but I think there is actual magic in it to make it look real. They are all purely imaginary creatures, though occasionally, there may be some slight factual basis for some of them. There have never been any authenticated cases of paranormal events. All that have been carefully investigated have been shown to be either figments of someone's imagination or hoaxes. What about aliens? I believe that we are not the only intelligent in the Universe and some extraterrestrial life in other planets although I do not believe that aliens have ever visited or being visiting earth. There could be other solar systems just like us and various forms of life can exist in the universe.
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Thanks for sharing your ideas about this matter.
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I personally don\'t believe there are actual supernaturual creatures.
>> I personally don\'t believe that there are actual supernatural creatures.
There could be some scary and possibly large beasts down in the ocean because it is a big place and we have never explored it thoroughly.
>> correct
However, I do not believe in witches or vampires.
>> correct
Witchcraft is a real religion and a real practice, but I think there is actual magic in it to make it look real.
>> Witchcraft is a real religion and practice, but I think there is an actual magic in it to make it look real.
They are all purely imaginary creatures, though occasionally, there may be some slight factual basis for some of them.
>> correct
There have never been any authenticated cases of paranormal events.
>> correct
All that have been carefully investigated have been shown to be either figments of someone\'s imagination or hoaxes.
>> correct
What about aliens?
>> correct
I believe that we are not the only intelligent in the Universe and some extraterrestrial life in other planets although I do not believe that aliens have ever visited or being visiting earth.
>> correct
>> OR: I believe that we are not the only intelligent in the Universe and some extraterrestrial life in other planets although, I do not believe that aliens have ever visited or been visiting the Earth.
There could be other solar systems just like us and various forms of life can exist in the universe.
>> correct
>> OR: There could be other solar systems just like us and various forms of life that exist in the universe.
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