Do you think there is a gender pay gap in your country? Give other situations were men are more domi

2019-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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There was a gender pay gap in Korea about two decades ago. But since then, I don\'t think there has been. The atmosphere of working place for that is getting better. They have been emphasizing on employee\'s ability and skill. And when most companies put some ads for WANT, they specifically notify contidions that they want for jobs such as genders, salary, working time and benefits , etc.

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Hi [이름]! Thanks for the effort for this homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^

Thanks for your thoughts on this one too! ^ ^ It\'s good to know that changes are evident when it comes to gender equality and pay. I hope we continue to be fair and equal to both men and women! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah


There was a gender pay gap in Korea about two decades ago.

>>Correct

But since then, I don\'t think there has been.

>>Correct

The atmosphere of working place for that is getting better.

>>The atmosphere in the work place is getting better. (or improving)

They have been emphasizing on employee\'s ability and skill.

>>They are now emphasizing on the employees abilities and skills regardless of gender.

And when most companies put some ads for WANT, they specifically notify contidions that they want for jobs such as genders, salary, working time and benefits , etc.

>>As for companies, they would specify their work conditions such as gender, salary, working time and benefits on their WANT ads.

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