Do you think there is a possibility for Artificial Intelligence to actually take over the earth? Why

2018-11-23 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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(It’s a really really extensive question to answer in 3 sentences. So I made each sentence longer and longer.) A few years ago, we watched ‘Alpha-Go’ overwhelmingly defeated top class professional Go-players and we recognized AI could extend its capacity through deep-learning very quickly. If we step aside and look closer from another viewpoint, we - human beings are the most harmful insects for this planet and we have so many contradictions and limitations. Even though scientists will consistently keep trying to limit the AI’s capacity, someday AI could reach the stage of the absolute being and it will take over this planet from contradictive and limited human beings. ---------------------- Ally! I think I am better at reading and writing than listening and speaking. If I preview for class and make a script in advance, you could overestimate my English. So, I decided not to preview for class. Don’t get disappointed! I will spend more time on reviewing instead!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!


I think you are doing well in all aspects involving the English language.

But you can try to be spontaneous in answering the questions in our book too, if you want. ^^

I appreciate how you made your sentences longer so you can still follow the limit I gave.

I like your answer to the question.

I agree with you and sometimes I fear that they might actually rule the world and there is nothing we can do about it.

Let\'s talk more about this in class.



~~t. Ally




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A few years ago, we watched ‘Alpha-Go’ overwhelmingly defeated top class professional Go-players and we recognized AI could extend its capacity through deep-learning very quickly.

>> A few years ago, we watched the \"Alpha- Go\" and it showed how it overwhelmingly defeated top class professional Go- players and allowed us to recognize how AI could extend its capacity through deep- learning concepts very quickly.


 If we step aside and look closer from another viewpoint, we - human beings are the most harmful insects for this planet and we have so many contradictions and limitations.

>> If we step aside and look at it from another perspective, we; the human beings, are the most harmful species this planet has, and we have so many contradictions as well as limitations.



 Even though scientists will consistently keep trying to limit the AI’s capacity, someday AI could reach the stage of the absolute being and it will take over this planet from contradictive and limited human beings.

>> CORRECT!

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