Do you think there is anything scary about marriage?

2014-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Indeed, there are a lot of things you have to give up after getting married although they are not the level of being scary. Marriage is something that two people who have different cultural background, different pesonalities, different phiolophy, and different view of life live together. Living together after marriage is completely different from dating someone before marriage. Before marriage, the different aspects or qualities of your spouse might be something that you admired and you were temptated by. However, after marriage, those differencies could sometimes be a main cause of conflict between you and your spouse. After marriage, you have to abandon yourself. You can hardly find time to ponder over life, death, destination, etc. You lose your freedom with marriage. You need to seek permission with your spous every time you want to move out with your friend. In addition, compromise, perhaps, forms the most difficult ingredient of marriage. You cannot insist your own thoughts.

강사 첨삭

Hello there,

I do appreciate your time to accomplish your homework. I do know that with this activity you better express your thoughts and opinions about a certain topic. 

Have a great day ahead and talk to you in class later.

Enjoy learning!!!!

T. Nina^^


Indeed, there are a lot of things you have to give up after getting married although they are not the level of being scary.

>> Indeed, there are a lot of things you have to give up after getting married, although you don\'t need to be scared with the changes.

Marriage is something that two people who have different cultural background, different pesonalities, different phiolophy, and different view of life live together.

>> Marriage is something that two people who have different cultural backgrounds, different personalities, different philosophies, and different views of life live together. 

Living together after marriage is completely different from dating someone before marriage.

>> correct

Before marriage, the different aspects or qualities of your spouse might be something that you admired and you were temptated by.

>> correct [tempted]

However, after marriage, those differencies could sometimes be a main cause of conflict between you and your spouse.

>> correct [differences]

After marriage, you have to abandon yourself.

>> correct

You can hardly find time to ponder over life, death, destination, etc.

>> correct

You lose your freedom with marriage.

>> correct

You need to seek permission with your spous every time you want to move out with your friend.

>> You need to seek permission with your spouse every time you want to go out with your friends.

In addition, compromise, perhaps, forms the most difficult ingredient of marriage.

>> correct

You cannot insist your own thoughts.

>> correct

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