Do you think there is still inequality between men and women there in South Korea?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course, You\'re still a man, so you have to do it and can\'t do it as a man? There\'s a culture like this in South Korea. And why do that as a woman? These things still exist.
강사 첨삭
Hi Elic!
Inequality is never okay. There shouldn\'t be any boundaries or limitations on what a man or a woman can and can\'t do.
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Of course, You\'re still a man, so you have to do it and can\'t do it as a man?
>> There is a culture where in you need to do certain things because you are a man. They also question you, \"Why can\'t you do it? You are a man!\"
There\'s a culture like this in South Korea.
>> CORRECT
And why do that as a woman? These things still exist.
>> And they always question why women do such things. These things still exist.
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