Do you think there should be a world holiday for everyone on Earth to celebrate together?
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I think there should be a global holiday for everyone on the planet to celebrate together. Because everyone has their own concerns. They have a hard time, too. Also, students don\'t have to go to school that day. It\'s because office workers don\'t have to go to the company.
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I think there should be a global holiday for everyone on the planet to celebrate together.
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Because everyone has their own concerns.
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They have a hard time, too.
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Also, students don\'t have to go to school that day.
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It\'s because office workers don\'t have to go to the company.
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