Do you think there will be more or less crime in the future? Explain your answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that there will be less crime in the future. there will be strict regulations and observation that control citizens and they will hardly commit a crime because of that. I mean that they couldn\'t commit a perfect crime. Long time ago, there were no CCTVs and fingerprint identifications. So, relatively many people broke a law and hid that fact. However, as time goes on, the techknowledge has developed and the crime rate have decreased. So, I suppose that there will be less crime in the future world. Also I hope that there will be better welfare policies in the future and people will not have to commit a crime in that future. I wish that it is possible.
강사 첨삭
Good evening Kevin!
I got what you mean in your answer. Well, we all want a crimeless and safe place to live in. Hopefully, we can achieve that if people just think fairly and morally. ^^
~T. Maine
>>Correct.
there will be strict regulations and observation that control citizens and they will hardly commit a crime because of that.
>>There will be strict regulations and observations that control citizens and they will hardly commit a crime because of that.
I mean that they couldn\'t commit a perfect crime.
>>I mean they couldn\'t commit a serious crime.
Long time ago, there were no CCTVs and fingerprint identifications.
>>A long time ago, there were no CCTVs and fingerprint identifications.
So, relatively many people broke a law and hid that fact.
>>So, relatively many people broke the law and hid the facts.
However, as time goes on, the techknowledge has developed and the crime rate have decreased.
>>However, as time goes on, the techie knowledge as developed and the crime rate has decreased.
So, I suppose that there will be less crime in the future world.
>>Correct.
Also I hope that there will be better welfare policies in the future and people will not have to commit a crime in that future.
>>Correct.
I wish that it is possible.
>>Correct.
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