Do you think there will be peace between North and South Korea during your lifetime?

2019-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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In my opinion there soon will be peaceful situation between north and south korea. Because both presidents of the country began to communicate, and try to make a peaceful moment that no had existed until now. We’ve started have a contact in social and culture. We can understand more easily because we share language, history and cultural things. So hopefully think that we can get a peace.

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QUESTION: Do you think there will be peace between North and South Korea during your lifetime?

In my opinion there soon will be peaceful situation between north and south korea.

>> I think there will be peace between North and South Korea soon.

Because both presidents of the country began to communicate, and try to make a peaceful moment that no had existed until now.

>> This is because the presidents of both countries started communicating, trying to create a peaceful moment that has never existed.

We’ve started have a contact in social and culture.

>> We\'ve started to have a contact in social and in culture.
We can understand more easily because we share language, history and cultural things.

>> We can easily understand them because we share the same language, history and cultural things.

So hopefully think that we can get a peace.

>> I hope that we can achieve peace.

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