Do you think time moves slowly or quickly?

2020-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

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I think it definitely depends on the ages. Time goes slowly for young people and it moves fast for adults. I guess that it is because of tasks which young people have to do before reaching ages. I got stressed to study a lot of subjects for entering the university. I thought that there would be no concerns if I became adults. However, I have more concerns than when I was young. Students only want to escape from the school and then they believe that everything will be positive in having a job, making money and so on. I realized that everything goes different way that I thought before. Now I am in the middle of life. I feel like that time flies. I think it is because I do regular things. I don\'t usually have any special events on weekdays. I feel that 7 days seem to be 1 day. It is really sad being old.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Mr. [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing this. Time really depends on each person.
I found it funny that you said it\'s sad being old. ^^ You\'re not yet that old, Mr. [이름]. Cheer up! ^^
~T.Avery
I think it definitely depends on the ages. 
>> CORRECT
Time goes slowly for young people and it moves fast for adults. 
>> CORRECT
I guess that it is because of tasks which young people have to do before reaching ages. 
>> I guess that it is because of the tasks which young people have to do before reaching certain ages. 
I got stressed to study a lot of subjects for entering the university. 
>> I got stressed from studying a lot of subjects required in entering the university. 
I thought that there would be no concerns if I became adults. 
>> I thought that there would be no concerns if I become an adult. 
However, I have more concerns than when I was young. 
>> CORRECT
Students only want to escape from the school and then they believe that everything will be positive in having a job, making money and so on. 
>> CORRECT
I realized that everything goes different way that I thought before. 
>> I realized that everything goes a different way than what I expected before.
Now I am in the middle of life. 
>> CORRECT
I feel like that time flies.
>> I feel like time flies.
OR>> I feel that time flies.
I think it is because I do regular things. 
>>CORRECT
I don\'t usually have any special events on weekdays. 
>>  CORRECT
I feel that 7 days seem to be 1 day.
>> CORRECT
It is really sad being old. 
>> CORRECT ^^

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