Do you think today’s adolescents are more mature than when you were growing up?

2018-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Selene

학생이 쓴 원문

Yes, I think so. Today's adolescents are smarter and more mature mentally and physically , although they are lack of independence. They are learning much information from many resources on the Internet or their cell phones. Comparing to the past, many korean mothers try to read them books a lot and let them read books. And also they can eat well- balnaced diet and nutritious food. So far, I have found out that my two daughters are aware of some information better than I expected. They said, they get some information from U Tube and on the Internet. They can have an easy excess anytime and anywhere to solve problems when they have some questions.

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Today\'s adolescents are smarter and more mature mentally and physically , although they are lack of independence.
>>>Today\'s adolescents are smarter and more mature mentally and physically , although they lack independence.
They are learning much information from many resources on the Internet or their cell phones. 
>>>They are learning much information from many resources on the internet or their cellphones. 
Comparing to the past, many korean mothers try to read them books a lot and let them read books.
>>>Comparing from the past, many Korean mothers try to read them a lot books and let them read books.
And also they can eat well- balnaced diet and nutritious food.
>>>And also, they can eat well-balanced diet and nutritious food.
They said, they get some information from U Tube and on the Internet. 
>>>They said that they get some information from YouTube and on the internet.

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