Do you think tone of voice is important when accepting or rejecting? Why?
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Imagine someone who get angry, but someone\'s voice is bright.
It is awkward.
Voice, face expression aren\'t independent factor.
It is linked each other.
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Imagine someone who get angry, but someone\'s voice is bright.
>> Imagine someone who is angry, but their voice sounds bright.
It is awkward.
>> It feels awkward.
Voice, face expression aren\'t independent factor.
It is linked each other.
>> A person’s voice and facial expressions are not independent factors — they are connected to each other.
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