Do you think traditional media, like newspapers and television, will disappear in the future? Why or
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I think people won\'t rely on traditional media in the future.
That is because it is convenient to use the mobile and wearable devices.
It is even easy to carry.
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I think people won\'t rely on traditional media in the future.
>> Correct
That is because it is convenient to use the mobile and wearable devices.
That is because it is convenient to use the mobile and wearable devices.
>> That is because it is convenient to use mobile and wearable devices.
It is even easy to carry.
It is even easy to carry.
>> They are even easy to carry.
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