Do you think traditional therapies are compatible with modern medicine? Why or why not?
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Thanks for making me smile today, Sir [이름]. ^^
You are right! There are still limitations in terms of treatment of diseases.
In that case, we should always be healthy by eating nutritious food and exercising.
Hope that you are having a great day.
Teacher Nina
Although modern medicine has been developed a lot and greatly contributed to the society, it still has a limitation in protecting and curing various diseases.
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The truth is that modern medicine is desperately short of new treatments.
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Even today, the number of patients are struggling between life and death because of no cure.
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Modern medicine is not perfect and alternative medicine such as traditional therapies should be reviewed as a supplement to it.
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In fact, 80 percent of the population in Africa and Asia still uses traditional remedies rather than modern medicine for primary healthcare.
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And even in developed nations, traditional methods such as acupuncture or homeopathy are widely used.
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I strongly believe that Western medicine would benefit by integrating traditional or alternative therapies and practices.
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Traditional medicine has much to offer global health, especially as new drugs have never been more urgently needed.
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Collaboration between modern and traditional medicine is important.
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